NOTE: Please don’t get offended I’m just trying to suggest. 
1. I saw your second mail.- Why not use the word read (past tense)
2. What are you trying to achieve? – What are you trying to prove?
3. Nanay at anak parin ako ng mommy ko. – Please omit the word “nanay”.
This is confusing.
4. You will never take that away – you will never take that away from me or why not rephrase it and use the word change
5. Look at yourself in the mirror – hanging sentence
6. This is the last you’ll hear from me – This will be the last…..
7. bull shit – single word please
8. actuations – hmmmm
9. words are crap to me and to us – crap to all of us.
